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Some of the text seems very small, especially the callouts, and the text blocks in the lower right/center.
I'm not crazy about the water vignettes, especially the paler water where it meets the green areas. Makes it look very fuzzy to me. It might work better if it were reversed, so the darker color is closer to the land. Or remove the vignette completely. As it is your legend patch for the water does not show a vignette.
The text for the callouts has been larger but it looked just too much. The two focuses is on the parcel detail as to which one is on or off the current sewer system and the details of the callouts. Should I bring the callouts outside and into the white space with the callout lines traveling throughout the map to get to the outline?
The vignettes are inclosed buffers and was looking for a effect of shallow water, I do agree with the areas of where it meets with the green, how about a darker blue so it doesn't look so white. This might help distinguish where water and forest meet.
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