Ok, all buzzy here on some very good coffee from the co-op down the
street...sorry if this sounds too edgy...
The first thing I noticed about the map was the sea floor terrain. Nice,
but it does not have anything to do with the point of the map.
Then I noticed the terrain on the land - nice too, but you can't see it in
most of the places that matter most - the great ape territories.
Then the colors used for the 4 categories on the map. There may be a
logic here, but it isn't clear. Three value-ish variations (dark red, salmon,
pink) and then, yellow? Maybe the three redish species are related in
some way, and distinct from yellow? Dark red and yellow jump out -
are they more important than the other two species? And then the poor
chimps. Looks like the color in the legend does not match the color on
the map. If I squint, and get out my Sherlock Holmes magnifier, it looks
as if the chimp color is transparent over the terrain (and that has created a
different color on the map). The other colors are not transparent, that I
can see.
Fortunately, we have a north arrow, as it would not otherwise be evident
which way is north.
And the map spanning scale bar. If anything, you might want to get a
sense of the size of the ape ranges, and the shortest segment (2000k)
is significantly wider than any of the territories.
It is a relatively simple fix. I know people like shaded terrain, even if
it dominates the visual hierarchy and has little to do with the data, so
why not keep it? Maybe at least ditch the ocean floor detail, unless there
are maps of aquatic apes in the atlas. Fix the colors (transparency is useful,
to see the terrain in the ape ranges, but messes with the colors); maybe
more qualitatively distinct choices, adjusting value a bit to compensate for
smaller/larger areas (smaller darker or more vivid hues to balance with the
larger ranges?). Shorten the scale bar and make sure it makes sense with
this projection, and bing the north arrow.
The other issue here is, of course, the other maps in the atlas. General
decisions have to be made that span a series of maps, so critiquing one
map in this context may not be entirely fair.
Overall - an ok start, and those adorable do pongids deserve a good map!
jk